Write a letter to a colleague who is hospitalized at the moment . In your letter you should Ask about his/her health Let him/her know what changes occurred since he /she has been hospitalized Also try to make him/her happy in some ways
Dear my colleague
I am writing to you in order to ask relevant to your health
as well as
to buck you up also
i
will inform you in terms of our office because of some news and variations in our office.
I and our colleagues Change the capitalization
I
are
concerned about your health Verb problem
am
as well
as
we are optimistic people so we believe that you will Correct word choice
and
be recovered
from proficient doctors.
Definitely, there have been various integral variations .the most amazing variation is that salaries have been improved through the manager Wrong verb form
recover
.undoubtedly
it is a dominant Rephrase
apply
as well as
a constructive strategy for improving workers' labour .
Also
, the manager decided to pay compensation to your family so that supporting
your family's industry because of your colossal ambulance payments.
so in my view undoubtedly you will be happy with Wrong verb form
to support
this
fruitful information as well as
sure your mood will be raised by my letter
Thank you for your attention
Yours sincerely
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite