In some countries , owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negativbe situation?

In most
of
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the
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countries
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people think that buying a
house
is more
is
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important than being a renter.
Primary
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cause for
own
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owning
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a
house
is that it changes their social status because people think that only
an
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affluent can buy
own
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their own
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house
.
However
, it should have some negative impact
in
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our happiness
such
as
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mortgage
morgage
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mortgage
payment
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.
This
notion has both merits and demerits. It is an undeniable fact that the price of properties
are
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higher than
past
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in past
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years, which means someone from
lower
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the lower
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middles
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class could not afford it. Due to
this
trend in India,
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property
propert
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property
rates are increasing day by day and many people are forced to buy houses for
high
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a high
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price
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prices
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by
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mortgage
morgage
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mortgage
payment
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payments
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, and
majorit
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majority
of them are not happy with
this
situation.
However
, being a
house
owner may change one's social status as only
rich
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the rich
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can buy
own
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their own
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houses.
Own
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Owning
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house
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a house
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is a common ambition for everyone throughout the world.
For instance
, in India , most
of
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the
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women are looking for men who
has
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own
house
. Women think that if one has
own
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their own
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house
then
he can take care of their family well.
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