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Band 5

Write a resignation letter your manager to let him know that you have started to cooperate with another company In your letter Let him know the exact time that you are leaving The actions you took in order not to cause The company any problems And also let him know your appreciate the time your cooperated with the company

Dear
sir
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Sir
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 or Madam I am Lobar Suyunova,
I
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and I
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work as an interpreter in your office . I am writing to you in order to let you know that I have started to cooperate with another
company
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. Several weeks ago .I decided to leave my work there
as well
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as
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, as
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 I found a job
that
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where
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 I work as a manager in another
company
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 . In my plan, I am going to resign next week on Friday in order to start my manager job
in
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at
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 another
company
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 .
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moreover
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Moreover
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, I will be going to do
valedictory
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a valedictory
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 by the next week in your office if you permit. In fact, I wish there were
not
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apply
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any
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no
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 problems connected with my resignation . So
i
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I
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 have not told our colleagues yet because my resignation may cause various discussions or gossip among my colleagues in your
company
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 .
Undoubtedly
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Undoubtedly,
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 I have
socialized
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socialised
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 my daytime in your
company
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 . I am very pleased with the opportunities and conveniences of your
company
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 . Because I worked as an interpreter in
the
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a
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 comfortable and light facility .
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, my salary was very valuable
rather
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to others . Definitely, my labour
always was
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was always
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 valued
marvellous
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 by you.
As well as
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 my partners and I were very friendly and brilliant people Thank you for your attention Yours sincerely Sakina

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task achievement
Make sure to clearly state your leaving date in the first paragraph to avoid confusion. Avoid using informal phrases.
coherence and cohesion
Each paragraph should focus on one main point to improve clarity. Consider using linking words to connect your ideas better.
coherence and cohesion
Use a more formal greeting such as 'Dear [Manager's Name]' and a more formal closing for a business letter.
task achievement
You expressed your appreciation for the company well, showing positive feelings towards your experience.
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You maintained a polite tone throughout the letter, which is important in professional communication.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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