You will be graduating from university and would like to invite your family to the ceremony. Write a letter of invitation to your parents. In the letter: – Explain that you have completed your studies – Give details of the event, including time, date and dress code – Let them know how many tickets they have and who they are for

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Dear Mom and Dad, I hope you are doing great. I am glad to inform you that I have successfully completed my bachelor’s degree.
Thus
, you guys are invited to attend the graduation ceremony which is going to be held in the
first
week of the
next
month. Yesterday I got an email regarding the venue details, so I thought I should inform you in the
first
place to prevent travel delays. The Ceremony is going to be held in the fishbowl Centre of Douglas College at 2:30 PM on 25th July 2019. The dress code is formal suits for men and western dresses for women. As you know, I have a stronger connection with my grandparents, and I want them to attend my graduation along with my siblings, but there are only 4 tickets available per person.
Although
, I have requested more tickets and the college said that they will inform me if there are additional seats available.
Therefore
, I will let you if we can arrange tickets. Let me know if you have any questions and I hope to see you soon. Yours Lovingly, Jaspreet Kaur
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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