In a number of developing countries, the quality of air and water is declining day by day. State the problems due to this? Discuss the possible solutions for dealing with these problems.

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are facing many challenges but
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quality
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produces many inhaling
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causes owing to less
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industrial wastage
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into rivers and
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in developing
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different diseases e.g. Cancer and Hepatitis. The
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solution to enhance the
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quality
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is to grow more trees in
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developing
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. More trees will bring more rain,
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quality
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will get better and better. The
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remedy is to introduce electric vehicles in these
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no smoke will produce in
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, there must be restrictions on industry wastage to put in rivers and
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as well. In a nutshell, low
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of
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and
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produce
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many health
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and animals as well. To resolve these
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different remedies have to implement in affected
countries
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pollution
  • emissions
  • industrial waste
  • respiratory diseases
  • cardiovascular issues
  • waterborne diseases
  • ecosystems
  • regulations
  • biodiversity
  • public transportation
  • renewable energy
  • waste management
  • fossil fuels
  • public awareness
  • healthcare costs
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