Many people think that is best to accept a bad situation like an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money

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Throughout life,
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face various situations and not all of them are good. It can be different issues
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as job loss, financial crisis, pandemic, or lack of
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. In my opinion, it is always better to try to resolve issues than accept them. I think the easiest and most destructive way of dealing with issues is to do nothing. According to my opinion,
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is the reason why some
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think it is better to accept even negative circumstances.
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, it takes a lot of time to find a new job
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of accepting an existing one. Passing the interview is stressful and there is always a chance to get negative feedback and to fail it.
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why some
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prefer to keep things as they are going. Some
people
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prefer an alternative point of view.
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, if they are in shortage of
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, they try to find an additional way to earn
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instead
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of saving
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. Or as another example, it can be said that
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people
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prefer to find a new job
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of accepting an unsatisfactory one. According to my opinion,
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approach contains high risks but it can lead to impressive results in case of success. Summing up the considered two points of view, it can be said that both approaches contain some advantages and disadvantages. If
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accept everything that happens in their life, it teaches them to see the value of the things they have. But I do not agree with
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statement. In my view, the
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approach is better because life is too short for accepting bad circumstances.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Contentment
  • Resilience
  • Personal growth
  • Endurance
  • Initiative
  • Advancement
  • Catalyst
  • Financial stability
  • Status quo
  • Innovation
  • Missed opportunities
  • Life satisfaction
  • Adverse situations
  • Taking control
  • Risk assessment
  • Change management
  • Self-improvement
  • Motivation
  • Stagnation
  • Proactivity
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