In Western Countries people spend a lot of money on their pets. They buy special food for cats and dogs, buy them toys and often pay high fees for medical treatment. Some people think this is a waste of money and argue that pets are dirty and dangerous. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a pet? Do people spend too much money on pets?

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present the perfect company for

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, some people see that they are extremely dangerous and not clean,

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, spending too much money on them is just a waste. In

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essay, I will list some benefits plus a few disadvantages of having an animal,

then

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the fact of paying a lot for them.

First

of all, aloneness

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not one of the man’s character

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is why he is always searching for

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company, it is the main reason for choosing

pets

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as dogs and cats,

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make them feel loved and

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.

In addition

, after destroying their natural home for

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construction, many creatures are becoming homeless with no essentials to live,

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why we need to take responsibility as we are the main cause and try to provide

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them

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safe places to live.

Second

of all, they are

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several challenges of having an animal

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your house,

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some of them stay wild and could not be domestic and friendly as we wish,

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they became a real danger for our families, the latest statistics of home’s accidents prove that 20 per cent are caused by

pets

. Another point is that animals could present a real centre of germs and

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batteries

bactteries

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bacteria

if we did not pay enough attention,

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like having a centre of diseases inside your property.

Finally

,

pets

give us love, security and company,

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they

also

need love, attention and

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which cost a lot, so for

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who could not provide

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for his animal and take

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huge responsibility, it is better to not have one. To sum up, with all its benefits and disadvantages, having an animal stay

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huge commitment and important

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not

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every person are able to make.