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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Self-Confidence is the most important factor for success in school or at work. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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Self-confidence
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 is the major factor for
success
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 in school or at
work
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. Mainly I agree with
this
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 fact because I assume it is really true, more and more
people
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 believe the opinion. I will put my thoughts into words in the forthcoming paragraphs. On the one hand, some
people
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 do not agree with
this
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 fact because they assume
people
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's
self-confidence
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 is disadvantageous. They think
people
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 must hard
work
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 and hard study so they will achieve their
aim
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 and
success
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. More and more
people
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 do not believe in themselves
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 they do not achieve their
aim
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. Nowadays a number of
people
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 do not
work
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 and study because they do not self- confidence. If
people
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 believe in their abilities that everything will be fine.
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 , I assume everything will be smart with
self-confidence
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. But everybody must believe in their abilities so they achieve easy everything.
Self-confidence
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 is really significant to our
aim
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. There are lots of advantages to
self-confidence
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, they are real alternatives.
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,
firstly
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 a number of
people
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 and young believe in themselves and their
aim
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,
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, they achieve
success
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. In conclusion ,
Self-Confidence
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 is the most major factor for
success
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 in school and
work
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,
in addition
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 to our life.

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Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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