You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with • explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres • offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

Dear Sir,
Madam
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or Madam
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, I am Trung Kieu who live in
Town
centers
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that you recently published
article
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an article
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about my
town
. I am writing to let you know that I have read the
article
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a
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the
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national news
last
Tuesday has some points I disagree
regarding
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structure
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the structure
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of
Town
is the same as others.
Also
, you mentioned interior design has
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a
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square shape and bright
color
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colour
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while
this
interior has
round
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a round
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shape and light
color
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.
Moreover
, wooden materials were used to build buildings by local people but the buildings were built by professional builders and used
cemen
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cement
men
to construct. The information you wrote is not totally true.
Thus
, I would like to request that you can amend or edit your
article
in order
to
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the
article
has
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the
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apply
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real and accurate design information. If you want me to show you incorrect information in your
article
, please let me know. I can offer you a tour to show
around
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you around
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the
Town
centers
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I will appreciate
if
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it if
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you can rewrite a new
Article
about my
Town
centers
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. Thank you Your faithfully.
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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