You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with • explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres • offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir,

Madam

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or Madam

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, I am Trung Kieu who live in

Town

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centers

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that you recently published

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article

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an article

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about my

town

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. I am writing to let you know that I have read the

article

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Building Design was published on

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the

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national news

last

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Tuesday has some points I disagree

regarding

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structure

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the structure

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Town

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is the same as others.

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, you mentioned interior design has

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square shape and bright

color

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colour

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while

this

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interior has

round

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a round

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shape and light

color

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colour

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Moreover

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, wooden materials were used to build buildings by local people but the buildings were built by professional builders and used

cemen

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cement

men

to construct. The information you wrote is not totally true.

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, I would like to request that you can amend or edit your

article

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in order

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the

article

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has

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the

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apply

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real and accurate design information. If you want me to show you incorrect information in your

article

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, please let me know. I can offer you a tour to show

around

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the

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centers

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centres

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I will appreciate

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it if

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you can rewrite a new

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about my

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centers

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. Thank you Your faithfully.

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

182 words

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