It is better to buy just a few expensive clothes, rather than lots of cheaper clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

Today with the improvements in the clothing industry there is a wide range of
clothes
with different materials being made, which led to the production and the rise of different clothing brands from cheap to expensive.
This
price
range gave people an option of choosing
clothes
with different
price
ranges, some people believe there is no difference in buying
clothes
at a higher
price
than the lower ones. But I disagree with them and the reason is that the material used in the
clothes
with higher
price
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are better. I remember buying a low-cost T-shirt from an unknown brand and when I wore it at
first
I didn't notice anything but after a ,while my skin show an allergic reaction to it and my skin got red so I went to a skin doctor and she told me the material used in the T-shirt was the reason for
this
reaction. So after ,that I decided to buy expensive
clothes
for the sake of my health. Cheaper
Clothes
also
have
also have
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a smaller life span, they will get old faster and the colour will fade faster
then
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the expensive ones,
thus
this
will lead to spending more money on buying more
clothes
but the expensive ones will
last
longer and save you more money over time. In conclusion , I think buying fewer expensive
clothes
will save us more money over time and
also
be better for you if you are allergic to
clothes
with cheap materials.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainability
  • long-lasting
  • cost-per-wear
  • economical
  • investing
  • ethical manufacturing
  • transparent
  • exclusivity
  • designs
  • mass-produced
  • accessibility
  • budget
  • fast fashion
  • trends
  • maintenance
  • dry cleaning
  • social status
  • psychological implications
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