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people living in large cities have to face many problems in every day life. what are those problems? should governmentencourge people to move to regional town? Give reasons for your answer and include any relavant examples from your knowledge?

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Nowadays, the public is more interested in living in urban operations because of the living
standards
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 and more work
opportunities
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 in these spaces. But these days, life in urban
areas
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 is becoming more problematic because of overpopulation.
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 of all, traffic congestion is the more common problem in urban
cities
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, Brampton is an overpopulated city in Ontario and the residents of
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 city face traffic jams in their daily routine which caused accidents and
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 waste the precious time of the public. Because of overpopulation, public transportation is always taking more time than usual.
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, the crime rate in the metropolitan metropolis is dramatically increased in Urban
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. Snatching and fighting and keeping weapons are common in some
cities
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 and the police are
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 helpless to reduce these. Apart from
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, these days due to inflation most of the public is unable to afford houses in big
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.
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, in small towns the property rates are reasonable. So some
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 think that living in the countryside is not a bad idea. But most
people
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 prefer urban
areas
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 due to living
standards
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. So, only government ease the situation to improve living
standards
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 in small
cities
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 to encourage
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 to move there. The government needs to take serious steps to improve the quality of life in regional
areas
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. Authorities should build schools, hospitals etc. to encourage the public to live there.
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, authorities need to increase industrialisation to create more job
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.
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, Timmins is a small town in Ontario, and because of the lack of ,work most
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 after their completing graduation move to urban
areas
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 to find work. In conclusion, Because of the living
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 and job ,
opportunities
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people
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 are preferring to live in metropolitan
cities
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. So, to ease
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 situation government needs to take serious steps to improve job
opportunities
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 in rural
areas
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.

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