Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic? What are the benefits and disadvantages of this?

Nowadays a lot of people are travelling to
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places
with extreme
conditions
like
Sahara
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desert
or the
Antartic
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Antarctic
and it is a benefit as they are able to see some breath-taking scenery our
world
has to offer but as they are unprepared for
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in the climate, few of them suffer serious injury or even death. Due to the advancement in technology, humans can now reach
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to
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any corner of the
world
within
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few
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days and visit
places
which we have never seen before like a
desert
in
africa
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or
to
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a continent like
Antartica
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Antarctica
, which is all made up of ice. Since globalization, people started travelling all over the
world
, which has created congestion in
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popular tourist destinations and because of that tourists are more interested in exploring
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unknown
unkown
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unknown
places
.
For Instance
, several people are going to
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Antarctica
antartica
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Antarctica
during peak winter, which is one of the coldest
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in the
world
to experience
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unique wildlife like a penguin or a polar
bear
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. These
type
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of animals are rarely seen in other parts of the
world
and
this
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great advantage of travelling to
places
with difficult
conditions
.
However
, going to
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places
with harsh
conditions
without preparation is a severe health risk. Tourists need to gain knowledge about the place like a
desert
otherwise
it
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damage to their physical health or even kill them.
For example
, we need to carry enough water if we are going to a
desert
, where
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temperature is above 50
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celcius
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during daytime and because of lack of water, we can die due to dehydration. Not understanding the
conditions
of
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places
with
harsh
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climate
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is the biggest disadvantage
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for
rfor
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for
tourists. In conclusion, Visiting unexplored
places
can show you some beautiful scenery hidden from the
world
but not having enough knowledge about the environment there before departing can be
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very harmful.
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