You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter, describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work say what you want the shop or company to do

Dear Sir, I bought a laptop from your store about 6 months ago and I am writing

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letter to you regarding the

screen

fading issue I am facing

since

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last

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the last

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few days. On

wednesday

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Wednesday

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I was working on my desk and I

accidently

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accidentally

spilled

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some water on my laptop. Due to that, the

screen

fades by itself from

time-to-time

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. Yesterday, I was giving a

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presentation

presention

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presentation

to a client, and the

screen

faded and because of

that

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I was unable to read

the

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anything on the

screen

.

This

is affecting my work as my manager thinks I was not prepared to give the presentation and because of that, he denied me a raise. I tried drying it with the help of a hair dryer but I was

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unsuccessful

unsucessful

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. I would really appreciate

if

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it if

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you can give me some advice on fixing it at home or I can drop

this

at the shop for repair but I would need a spare monitor until I get mine back. Let me know if you have any other questions. Sincerely, Vimal Thakkar.