You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your letter Give details of the purchase Describe the problem Explain why you need a replacement urgently

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Dear sir or madam, I am writing to you regarding a purchase that I made on 22nd July on your website. I purchased a red shirt and two pairs of blue jeans, but unfortunately, there is a problem with the shirt that you sent me. I ordered an XL shirt but I received a Large one

instead

thus

I wanted to send it back for a change. Kindly I need

this

change to happen very soon because I need it for the job interview that

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have in the

3 days so I would appreciate it very much if you looked into the matter quickly. Sincerely, Ali

Submitted by Nedjoo on Mon Dec 05 2022

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

108 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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