some people think that it is a good idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and weekends . other people think it is important to keep working life completely separate from social life . discuss boyh these views and give youe own opinion

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Work
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is an important part of our daily lives. We
work
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8 hours a day and 40 hours a week, so it takes a
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of our life to spend in
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the work
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work place
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, and because of
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this
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we see our
colleagues
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every day, like a
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family.
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it is natural to become close with our
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partners after a while and make friends with them.
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friendship could lead to spending
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at the weekends with them and in my opinion for some who are still single is a good thing because there is no family that they need to spend
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with them back home but for a person who is married things are different. Married people need to spend more
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with their spouse or children if they have one to ensure the roots of their family, but there are some exceptions some
colleagues
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have a family of their own and it is good for both families to spend
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together and let their children make friends with each other. In my own experience spending
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with my
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after
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was a good thing because it ended in getting to know new people which got me some new freelance jobs and
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increased my circle of friendships. In conclusion, I think it completely depends on the person and their priorities after
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, if they have a family back home they must spend more
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with them rather than their
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and if they are still single or free I think
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time
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spent with them, will help them to make more connections outside
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and socialise with new people
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