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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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It is common that some pupils to show rude and disrespectful behaviours at
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 which causes difficulties.
This
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 and other
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 representatives can help them to solve it. Primary causes of
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 rude behaviours are lack of control at some
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 and poor relationships between
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 and students.
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rules
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 are mostly based on how to wear a uniform
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 when they should be at
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 and preventing cheating on exams.
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, they don’t focus on how children behave towards their classroom mates and
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.
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, bullying which is popular among teenagers happens in many places and adults prefer not to see
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 violence between children, as time passed,
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 rudeness becomes more severe.
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, sometimes pupils do not respect their
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 and do not care about their lessons.
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, they enter the classroom late and do not do their homework and are noisy and naughty during class. Because of that,
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 become too angry which affects the atmosphere of the whole class. To prevent
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 unpleasant evidence,
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 should set some strict
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 and interactive lessons should be preferable. Even though at some
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, there are several
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 about how kids should behave at
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, it can be good
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 spreads to others too. To clean a classroom, doing a social job can be a good example as a punishment for children who are rude towards others.
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, group projects, and doing activities with
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 outside of the class as homework build strong relationships between kids and their friends and
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. To sum up, there can be some problems with the pupils at the
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 due to less control and poor connections between youths and adults. But, balanced
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 and good-quality lessons can solve those problems too.

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