Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views.

Some are of the opinion that being a student in

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is essential to pursue an outstanding career path because these institutions contribute to

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's social and academic skills.

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, others are convinced that getting a

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immediately after school is

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experience is gained

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of theoretical

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. In my view, it is necessary to receive a higher education that ensures

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comprehensive learning before being employed. On the

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hand, educational institutions provide to bring out the best in oneself by educating and preparing for business and social life. Meeting new

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and involving a different environment allow

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to see other perspectives.

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, studying at a college is beneficial for acquiring academic

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from experts in the field. To illustrate, a person who took

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education from

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can manage time efficiently and think critically.

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, interacting with surroundings boosts

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's cooperation and empathy skills and might be explored leadership skills by existing in group projects. I think, getting a

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degree is crucial because it is significant for climbing the career ladder.

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,

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no longer see

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as necessary after school since spending years in these academies is waste of time and money.

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who prefer to get a

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rather than take a higher education can receive applied

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and experiences, and

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earn money at the same time. The information learned in universities is forgotten as long as do not apply;

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, a given task in a

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adds

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by presenting an opportunity to practice. To give an example, Bill Gates who is

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of the most successful and richest

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in the world dropped out of Harvard

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to find Microsoft. In conclusion, it is believed

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that going to

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is necessary to follow

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career due to interpersonal and academic ability. Yet, it is thought

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others that

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should get a

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after graduating a high school because of hands-on experiences. I am of the opinion that

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is required to get ready for real life.