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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the lack of certain types of plants and animals. A more important environmental issue that others say exists. Discuss both of these points of view and give your opinion.

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In recent years, more and more environmental issues have been widely discussed broadly all around the world. There are many unpleasant changes on the earth which
caused
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 by mostly
human’s
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 actions. Some
people
 claim that the disappearance of particular
species
 of
animals
 and plants is the main problem of our time, while others argue that there are more important
problems
 in our environment.
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explanation
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. It is true that environmental
problems
victimizes
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the
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plants and
animals
 the most than any other
matters
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 on the earth. Studies frequently show that numerous
of
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species
 of plants and
animals
 have been going extinct since the 19th century. Mostly because their natural habitats are destroyed by human activities and harsh living conditions they live in. Generally, any adverse distinction in the environment directly
harm
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 the natural
species
.
However
,
negative
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 consequences of these
problems
 do not just harm other
livings
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living
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, but
also
 affect us as,
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people
. Since we live on the same planet, humans are
also
 devastated too, along with the
animals
. Because of land and water contamination, the cases of
people
 getting ill are skyrocketing. That being said, there are many more negative outcomes
underlays
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 in
environment
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the environment
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. In conclusion, there are
people
who
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to
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do
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 say that global issues causing some
species
go
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 extinct
is
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 the main problem we are facing today, while others believe these environmental
problems
 affect globally. Either way, these situations are atrocious,
thus
, we must take immediate action in order to prevent even worse possible situations.
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