People doing dangerous sport activities like scuba diving and bungee jumping, they should be responsible for their own life and rescue workers should not risk their lives to save people. Do you agree or disagree?

No one can deny that new generations are interested

to

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playing

hazard

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exercise

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such

as scuba diving and bungee jumping,

however

, they could be responsible for their personal

life

and safety workers should not take risks to save people. I disagree with

this

notion, rescue workers

are take

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their

duties

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to save

youths

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life

in dangerous activities and they have

responsibility

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to save more people as possible in

hazards

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situations I will

elaborated

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in the looming paragraphs.

To begin

with the disagreement, In

this

world

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all types of activities are permitted by the international governments and many people

doing

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bad

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activity because they think their authority will

safe

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them but they have

responsibility

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to save their own

life

instead

of others.`

To

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explain

exlapin

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, Many nations

are improve

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their

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facilities

facilites

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for their foreign tourists because they allowed their public to take a ride to scuba diving because they like publicity for their

country

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development and they hire a

hug

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number of

rescue

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team

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to save

these kind

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of massive.

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ride

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are well-known for their popularity

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served

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their

regions

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advancement on a high level and each year over the globe they give jobs to save

others

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individuals who take

this ride

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because

sometime

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they

out

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of control

to

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their machery system.

Furthermore

, It is important for all newcomers to learn safety skills because they should be responsible for their own

life

and

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it's an essential part of

life

to learn

this kind

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of

defense

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techniques and it useful for

dangerous

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time

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such

as robbery and snatching.

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, In

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digital technology is advanced all

self defence

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course

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are available on the internet and it

good

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to

listen

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this

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skills because they have many benefits to save their own souls.

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.

In

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German schools

are

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teach

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their students how to save their

heart

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on

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a bad hours

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because they understand

this

phenomenon

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effects and

their

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upcoming generations are strong for the help of

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contribution. In conclusion,

although

dangerous sports exercise is good

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sometimes

somtimes

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sometimes

and their safety volunteers

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risk

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to save

someone

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life

who enjoy

this

age.

Moreover

, Every person

are

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responsible for their soul due to they

also

prepare for bad news before the incident.