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Accidents are common on roads. What are the causes of this problem? Can you speculate the effects of this phenomenon and how could the frequency of accidents be reduced?

#accidents #roads #effects #phenomenon #frequency
The number of vehicles on roads
such
 as cars and buses has increased recently.
This
 has resulted in the
quantity
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 of
accidents
is
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increasing day by day.
This
 essay will argue
that
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the causes and effects of
this
problems
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problem
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, and the solution way of
this
 situation. The primary reason why
accidents
 occur commonly is
unawareness
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the unawareness
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 of
public
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the public
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. When
drivers
 don't pay necessary attention while driving a vehicle, the accident rate naturally starts to increase. To illustrate, driving licence
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courses
sources
cources
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courses
 can not give
the
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sufficient education to candidate
drivers
, which can lead to them don't
understanding
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 the importance of driving. To sum up, the most
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significant
siginficant
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significant
 cause of
rising
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the rising
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 number of
accidents
 is that
public
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the public
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 can not determine how serious driving a vehicle
.
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 There is a crucial effect of
this
 situation, which is monetary damages.
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, every year 35% of total produced vehicles can not use. The obvious reason
in
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, in this case,
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this
 case is
accidents
.
Thus
, companies
such
 as BMW, Mercedes and, Audi which are the most famous manufacturer of vehicles are
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suffering
sufferring
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suffering
 from
this
 incident. In brief, having common
accidents
 is not beneficial for
finance
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the finance
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 of companies. Adjusting the regulation by the government as to how
drivers
 should drive is
one
 of the big solutions
of
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 reducing
frequency
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the frequency
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 of
accidents
. If there is no deterrent law in the country, having a high accident rate is
inevitable
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an inevitable
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 consequence.
Therefore
,
government
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the government
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 should be regulating the laws which are not adequate to avoid
accidents
. To exemplify, after the adjustments in Turkey about traffic rules, the percentage of
accidents
 showed a sharp decrease in
one
 year. So the density of
accidents
 could be reduced thanks to new rules. In conclusion,
rising
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 quantity of
accidents
 is a vital issue. Unawareness of
public
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the public
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 is
one
 of the causes and financial damage is
one
the
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 downsides of
this
problems
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problem
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. I strongly believe that there is
one
 way to overcome
this
 issue. The method is regulating new laws which are
deterrent
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deterrents
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 for
drivers
.
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