Accidents are common on roads. What are the causes of this problem? Can you speculate the effects of this phenomenon and how could the frequency of accidents be reduced?

The number of vehicles on roads

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as cars and buses has increased recently.

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has resulted in the

quantity

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of

accidents

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increasing day by day.

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the causes and effects of

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problems

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, and the solution way of

this

situation. The primary reason why

accidents

occur commonly is

unawareness

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the unawareness

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of

public

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the public

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. When

drivers

don't pay necessary attention while driving a vehicle, the accident rate naturally starts to increase. To illustrate, driving licence

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courses

sources

cources

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courses

can not give

the

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sufficient education to candidate

drivers

, which can lead to them don't

understanding

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the importance of driving. To sum up, the most

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significant

siginficant

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significant

cause of

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the rising

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number of

accidents

is that

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the public

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can not determine how serious driving a vehicle

.

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There is a crucial effect of

this

situation, which is monetary damages.

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, every year 35% of total produced vehicles can not use. The obvious reason

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this

case is

accidents

.

Thus

, companies

such

as BMW, Mercedes and, Audi which are the most famous manufacturer of vehicles are

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suffering

sufferring

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suffering

from

this

incident. In brief, having common

accidents

is not beneficial for

finance

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the finance

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of companies. Adjusting the regulation by the government as to how

drivers

should drive is

one

of the big solutions

of

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reducing

frequency

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the frequency

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of

accidents

. If there is no deterrent law in the country, having a high accident rate is

inevitable

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an inevitable

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consequence.

Therefore

,

government

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the government

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should be regulating the laws which are not adequate to avoid

accidents

. To exemplify, after the adjustments in Turkey about traffic rules, the percentage of

accidents

showed a sharp decrease in

one

year. So the density of

accidents

could be reduced thanks to new rules. In conclusion,

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the rising

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quantity of

accidents

is a vital issue. Unawareness of

public

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the public

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is

one

of the causes and financial damage is

one

the

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downsides of

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problems

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. I strongly believe that there is

one

way to overcome

this

issue. The method is regulating new laws which are

deterrent

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deterrents

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for

drivers

.