Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems

our world is so beautiful. Yet so fragile. And there
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so many environmental problems that
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the earth more and more wrecked.And for 2
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i
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think that the main
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environmental
enviromantal
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environmental
problem of our time is the loss of particular
species
of
animal
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animals
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and plants. from my point of view
first
and most important
reason
is
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deal
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of
species
have
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extinct and it affected
food
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chain because of
humans
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creations. Humans have invented
lot
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of
things
, which
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totally safe inventions to much more harmful ones. And that harmful
things
affected our environment, destroyed
animals
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habitats as well as ours not only animal
habtats
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habitats
it
also
polluted animals and was the
reason
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animal extinction.
Next
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reason
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why the loss of particular
species
of plants and animals is the main environmental problem of our time is
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deforestation
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that deforstation
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deforstation
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deforestation
is growing day by day and plants and trees are no longer able to clean the polluted air.
That is
making
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people
peopl
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people
to
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get
illness
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and lung
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diseases
deseases
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so if we don't do
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something about
somethingabout
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it our younger generation have to deal with
this
big problem and
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don't think
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idea. so in conclusion, we made
things
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worse and if we don't correct and prevent more possible dangers that are waiting
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to do one wrong step. It might be too late for us to do anything .
That is
totally our worst nightmare, and it all started with
extinction
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of one or two
species
that we
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did
didn
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not even care to kill. it became worse and worse, and blink of an eye, we killed a lot of living
things
and that made our environment
to
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get weaker
ready
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and ready
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to vanish. we live on earth so we have to save it from
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extinction
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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