The government should allocate more funding to teaching science rather than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress.

There is a crucial argument over whether authorities ought to provide more capital on
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students on technological courses as compared to other modules with the insight of
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the national income.
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more investment in science will enhance the
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and treatment of any ailment in a given
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experts in the medical domain to profer
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. Most developed countries like the United State of America were able to provide a vaccine that could be used to combat the virus.
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administration has supported richly in sciences.
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national wealth. Rather, I would say that councils should look out for other sectors which will cause
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rapid development and
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but in other courses as these can jointly and massively contribute to a
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