A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world.

Nowadays

tourism

generate

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significant

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a significant

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contribution to

countries

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countries'

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economy and provide many advantages, whereas it is thought by some

people

that without proper management,

tourism

can cause several disadvantages for a

country

. In my opinion, I believe even though,

tourism

causes few drawbacks a

country

can earn more benefits from

tourism

.

Firstly

,

tourism

plays a key role in many developing

countries

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countries'

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economy

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economies

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such

as Sri Lanka, India and Indonesia,

moreover

,

tourism

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the tourism

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industry is the

second

highest foreign income maker in Sri Lankan GDP.

Secondly

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it

is helps

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helps

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to develop the

countries

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infrastructures, due to

tourism

the

country

tends to develop their transportation, roads and hotels for

tourist

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tourists

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.

This

implementation support to

creates

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new

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jobs for

people

,

for

example

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tour guides, restaurant workers and hotel staff. Creating new jobs helps

people

to develop their social

wellbeing

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well-being

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.

Tourism

supports not only

for

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the

country

but

also

for

people

to have

better

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life.

On the other hand

,

tourism

also

has several disadvantages, some

argues

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that

tourism

negatively

affect

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to

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apply

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the

countries

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country's

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culture

,

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since

people

trying

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to copy and

adopt

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adapt

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according

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the

tourist

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tourist's

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native

culture

(western

culture

),

this

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leads to disappear the

culture

of the

country

, certain

people

could not understand

tourist

visiting a

country

not only to see

tourist

attractions but

also

experience the

culture

of a nation.

Furthermore

, many tourists

bringing

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their valuable goods, most often these goods becoming a target for criminals,

therefore

, it is believed that

tourism

led to

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an increase

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increase

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number

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the number

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of

crime

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activities.

However

,

government

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the government

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can protect

tourist

and their valuables by

implement

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rules and securities. In conclusion,

although

,

tourism

has few negative effects, it has more positive outcomes, not only providing foreign currency but

also

to

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enhancing the quality

life

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of life

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of

people

. I believe that these benefits of

tourism

outweigh its drawbacks.