A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world.

Nowadays

tourism

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generate

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significant

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a significant

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contribution to

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countries

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countries'

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economy and provide many advantages, whereas it is thought by some

people

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that without proper management,

tourism

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can cause several disadvantages for a

country

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. In my opinion, I believe even though,

tourism

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causes few drawbacks a

country

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can earn more benefits from

tourism

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.

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,

tourism

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plays a key role in many developing

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countries

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countries'

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economy

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economies

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such

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as Sri Lanka, India and Indonesia,

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,

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tourism

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the tourism

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industry is the

second

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highest foreign income maker in Sri Lankan GDP.

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Secondly

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it

is helps

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to develop the

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countries

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infrastructures, due to

tourism

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the

country

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tends to develop their transportation, roads and hotels for

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tourist

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tourists

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.

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implementation support to

creates

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new

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of new

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jobs for

people

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,

for

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example

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tour guides, restaurant workers and hotel staff. Creating new jobs helps

people

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to develop their social

wellbeing

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well-being

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.

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supports not only

for

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apply

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the

country

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but

also

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for

people

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to have

better

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life.

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,

tourism

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also

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has several disadvantages, some

argues

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that

tourism

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negatively

affect

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to

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apply

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the

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countries

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country's

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culture

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,

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since

people

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trying

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to copy and

adopt

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adapt

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according

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the

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tourist

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tourist's

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native

culture

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(western

culture

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),

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this

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leads to disappear the

culture

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of the

country

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, certain

people

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could not understand

tourist

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visiting a

country

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not only to see

tourist

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attractions but

also

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experience the

culture

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of a nation.

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, many tourists

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their valuable goods, most often these goods becoming a target for criminals,

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, it is believed that

tourism

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led to

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an increase

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increase

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increasing

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number

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the number

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of

crime

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activities.

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,

government

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the government

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can protect

tourist

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and their valuables by

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rules and securities. In conclusion,

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,

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has few negative effects, it has more positive outcomes, not only providing foreign currency but

also

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to

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apply

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enhancing the quality

life

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of life

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of

people

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. I believe that these benefits of

tourism

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outweigh its drawbacks.