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Were you to given the opportunity to work in the bank, please demonstrate your ability to prioritize multi-tasks under busy workload and heavy pressure with limited instructions and to meet deadlines with attention to details.

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In order to address the situation where multi-
tasks
 have to be done and work pressure is enormous, I would adopt the following 4-steps methodology based on my previous work experience.
To begin
 with, making a list is essential.
This
 list will include all the
tasks
 which are still in progress. The
next
 step is to prioritize these
tasks
 in sequence, by setting multiple criteria and indicators
such
 as deadline, estimated period needed to finish and complexity ( to make sure I can solve the task on my own). On top of that, some of the urgent
tasks
 need to be the top priority. While there are
also
 some other
tasks
 that might be allowed to delay for several days.
Thirdly
, I will ensure that there are some special
tasks
.
For example
, some of them might need team cooperation and cannot be done by myself. For these
tasks
, meetings might be required and some other pre-documents might need to prepare in advance.
Therefore
, arranging a meeting and checking if the documents needed are all ready for
such
tasks
 are necessities. Another example is the
tasks
 that are beyond my capability. For these
tasks
, I fail to estimate the period I need to finish them.
Then
 I will search for help for other colleagues until I figure out the correct approach to deal with these
tasks
. In the final step, I have already made sure all the
tasks
 and the total period needed to finish them.
However
, from the previous estimation, if the time left is not enough, I will talk to my mentor to report the circumstance I am facing right now and search for more help from others,
this
 can avoid the risks in advance, in case I find out I cannot finish the
tasks
 by the end of the deadline.
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