You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. Write 150 words. In your letter: -Explain the important event -Apologize for the situation -Suggest a new arrangement

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Dear John, How are you? I hope you are well. I am writing to let you know I will cancel our gathering, and I feel sorry about it. Since I was requested by my company to host an important annual meeting event, I will have to stay at the company without taking a vacation. The meeting date is in the same period that I originally planned to meet you in Canada. I sincerely feel sorry about not participating in the trip, and I know that I have not seen each other for a while.

Additionally

, all of our best friends must be disappointed due to my absence. I hope you will forgive me and I will arrange another time to visit you. I will plan an alternative plan in November to meet you in Canada, and I will bring my wife to come together.

Furthermore

, I will compensate for my mistake by booking four premier opera tickets for the Lion King to invite you and your wife to join

this

event. I know you and your wife are keen on

this

opera. I look forward to hearing you soon and hope you can accept my forgiveness. Warm wishes, Claire

Submitted by claire9377 on Tue Dec 06 2022

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