RESEARCH INDICATES THAT THE CHERACTERISTICS WE ARE BORN WITH HAVE MUCH MORE INFLUENCE ON YOUR PERSONALITY AND DEVELOPMENT THAN ANY EXPERIENCES WE MAY HAVE IN OUR LIFE. WHICH DO YOU CONSIDER TO BE THE MAJOR INFLUENCE?

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modern world.

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of building

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in terms of outlook and character

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more than any

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plays a vital and prominent role. In

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why I disagree with the above statement.

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, if we could utilize the

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we gain from working or travelling abroad, we would be more mature and more

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of their lifestyles and culture and eventually become more knowledgeable.

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become more self-independent than others if we live in a harsh environment when we were young.

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, in China, many children have to sacrifice their

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and come out to work since they were small. They

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proved to have the ability to make more mature decisions on their own in

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china between those who are affluent and those who are

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in poverty.

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, people who face a lot of issues in their lives will have a detailed plan of what to do

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, it is apparent that

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from various fields in their

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have a huge influence on one’s

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and

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. Agglomerating all the above points elaborated, I would like to conclude that one can learn multifold things

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