In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general education across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. Which do you think is appropriate in today’s world?

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secondary school in several countries. The

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option is teaching children general subjects to gain various

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of knowledge. In others, the students will be focusing more on

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careers.

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of subjects is superior to the other

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and the main points will be expressed in the following paragraph. The

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benefit is that all junior until high school kids will have a variety

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.

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students to achieve their

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will increase.

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the subjects that are relevant to

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each job, it might shut down an opportunity for other students to learn

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that is

more suitable for them.

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it might cause depression for them. A related advantage for the student is to understand the point of view of

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others. A different class will contain various styles of people which

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us to receive various ideas. According to Japanese science research, a project group which

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ideas from members who have

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create with the same perspectives, the result will be a boring piece of art. Eventually, our world population will be less creative. In conclusion,

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on

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a chance to find their path and understandable

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thought.

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will be able to

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their career goal

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the end.