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Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people a better education. Agree or disagree.

#prison #countries #crime #people #education
Crime
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one of the main problems in any
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.
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, people think that better education should replace prison to treat a criminal. I partly agree with
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 the following essay. On the one hand, I admit that law offenders should be put in jail due to the terrible wrongdoings they have done for some
reasons
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First
, punishing criminals has contributed to
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 the pain of the victims since they have been negatively affected while they may not do anything wrong.
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mistrust or a lack of sympathy among residents if the wrongdoings are not punished properly. For
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, Le Van Luyen - a terrible robber and killer in Vietnam was believed to be kept in prison forever as he killed
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amongst
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 all people in the family for gold.
On the other hand
, I believe that educational
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 should be used
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 of hard punishment due to
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 share of benefits for society.
First
 of all, by exposing to education through books or lessons, criminals
then
 have a chance for the sake of approaching to moral things which can have an optimistic influence on them. Indeed,
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criminals are allowed to take that opportunity to think and live better. Afterwards, the community may have more good people than bad ones due to
this
 ethical method of punishment. In conclusion, for many years,
prison
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 has been seen as
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effective
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effective
 way in order to address the problem of crime, I
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belive
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 that better education should be taken into consideration since it may have positive effects on society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • tackles root causes
  • preventative approach
  • critical thinking
  • decision-making skills
  • recidivism rates
  • equipping
  • socio-economic benefits
  • underlying factors
  • poverty
  • ignorance
  • lack of opportunities
  • rehabilitation
  • ineffective
  • higher rates of re-offending
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