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Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can is better for their overall skills development and creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree?

#activity #child #skills #development #creativity
Doing an entertaining activity in
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 company of
child
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a child
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 can bring him more joy, development and creative skills than reading.
This
 topic can be discussed in both positive and negative ways, but
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 my perspective, doing something that you enjoy really makes you more pleased and evolve
kid's
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 creativity and makes up their minds. One of the obvious instances is a
child
 that loves drawing or sculpting and has
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talent, but
parents
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their parents
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 force him to read,
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 makes him less confident in his interests and unsure about his own hobbies. All a
child
 needs is support from his parents to keep working hard on what he relishes doing,
hence
 he'll make something really big and entertaining out of it.
However
, reading is
also
 very good for a developing little soul and it is amazing if
child
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 loves reading, won't be a problem if a kid didn't like it, but reading really helps to set up
person's
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a person's
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 mind and form his personality. Reading
also
 replenishes vocabulary, so
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also
 one of
creative
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the creative
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 activities, that can be a reason
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 a kid's joy and happiness. But I'm mostly inclined to the fact that children should do whatever they want, not something they are forced to do.
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