Water shortage is a dangerous problem in the world. Discuss the consequences and solutions for this problem? And do the social media or newspapers spread the awareness among people? And examples which are relevant.

In the recent modern world, the danger of

water

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shortage

shortange

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shortage

is getting more serious along with the environmental issues.

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serious problem brings us quite a few critical challenges,

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example

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, crops die, diseases spread

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and eventually

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an ultimate threat to

human-beings

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human beings

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. I believe the fundamental remedy for

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is to improve the

environment

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account, even now, SNS and other

mass

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media

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sometimes take up

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issue, trying to

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heighten

lighten

highten

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heighten

people's awareness,

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a lot more that they can do to improve the situation. The

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most

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critical result of

water

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shortage is desertification and

dried up

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the field

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field

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.

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example

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, if people

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continued

contiued

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continued

deforesting without considering the

environment

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, crops would die and famine would certainly follow.

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, global warming will be escalated and live stocks would

perished

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. As a consequence, many diseases would spread and eventually becomes an ultimate threat to

world-wide

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worldwide

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human beings'

survivals

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survival

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. To avoid

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vicious cycle, we have to take actions to improve the

environment

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,

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example

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to stop using fossil fuels, cease

to destroy

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destroying

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woods

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, and stop wasting

water

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on

mass

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products productions at factories all over the world. The

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point to consider is the role of

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media

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. Nowadays,

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media

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like SNS and newspapers often take up subjects of

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environmental issues,

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however

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, not so much on

water

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shortage.

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media

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should focus more on

serious

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risks of

deforesting

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deforestation

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and desertification

more concretely

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for

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example

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, a photograph of

dying

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animal due to lack of

water

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may

powerful

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to raise voice to create awareness on the subject. In conclusion,

water

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shortage is one of the most serious problems for society as a whole and we definitely need

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immediate attention to avoid it. Each one of

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the citizens

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citizens

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citizen

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should have a mindset of changing the

environment

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better, and

mass

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media

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as the internet communication and news magazines should raise

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their voice

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voice

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to address

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danger.