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In some countries levels of health and fitness are decreasing and average weights are increasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what are some possible solutions?

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It is true that
people
 nowadays are easier to get weight than before, and there is a clear correlation between the frequency of working out and
sports
. In
this
 article, we will show some reasons why the community choose to do fewer
sports
 and eat more. After the
analysing
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 there
also
 will be some solutions to
this
 situation. The causes of
this
 problem are complicated, several things together make the issue worse.
First
,
the
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society
face
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faces
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 more and more
pressions
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pressures
 and stress than ever.
For example
, the city has never contained
such
 a large population, and more
people
 means more competition and races. The community have to pay more attention and hard working to their job. And pressures can cause getting weight and eating more.
Secondly
, the busy routine of their lives makes it harder to squeeze time for
sports
 and the gym.
Therefore
 it is difficult to stay healthy and keep
fitness
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.
Finally
, the biological intrinsic of humans is to eat high-fat and high-sugar food. When a person is tired because of work, it is hard to control himself to eat healthily, so an unhealthy diet
also
 causes
people
 to have
fitness
 problems. But there is still something that we could do to cope with
this
 problem. On the one hand, the authorities must encourage
people
 to do some
sports
 with some financial incentive. The government can
also
 choose to give out financial support to the companies, to let them lighter the missions or build some gyms in their office.
On the other hand
, refectories in the workplaces can
also
 provide healthy food and snacks for the employees. The government can lower the prices of canteens to encourage
people
 to eat there and to identify healthy diets. More than
this
, the authorities can
also
 hold some huge activities to simulate public
sports
,
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 a sporting atmosphere. And organize some free medical check-ups, improving the awareness of
fitness
. In conclusion, it is necessary for the community to realise it is important to keep
the
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 level of
fitness
 and be healthy. And more actions should be taken to solve
this
 problem.
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