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The plans below show a public park when it first oppened in 1920 and the same park today.

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The plans illustrate a variety of developments that took place in Grange park between 1920 and the present. Overall, a comparison of the
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 maps reveals a replacement of new entertainment and a rotation of some facilities. In 1920, there were
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 entrances connected with Eldon street and Arnold avenue on different sides which has a fountain placed in the middle while stages for musicians were located in the west of the park surrounded by four seats and
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 gardens.
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, the glass house was placed beside Eldon street and only
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 rose gardens and ponds for water plants were located in the north. Nowadays, there are a number of dramatic changes in grange park.
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, the stage for musicians was knocked down and replaced by Amphitheater for concerts in which there is only one rose garden remaining while others were moved to the middle surrounded by seats.
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, the most noticeable in the east are all facilities will be demolished for the construction cafe, children's play area and water feature which is beside the new entrance underground carpark.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recreational facilities
  • landscaping
  • naturalistic
  • amenities
  • formal gardens
  • ergonomic
  • symmetric designs
  • inclusive
  • accessible
  • accommodations
  • native plant species
  • societal changes
  • visitor services
  • community events
  • evolution
  • modern playgrounds
  • wildflower meadows
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