Nowadays, society considers
money
as a way to pursue contentment.
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from one person to the other, if we
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at the perspective of
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system today, we can not hide the fact that many aspects of
life
only can be afforded by using
wealth
.
In the
first
civilisation,
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does not use
money
but they used a barter system to exchange different objects
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with the same value. For
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example, if a farmer needs protein for their food but does not have the chance to go hunting, they could barter their crops with meat from the hunter who
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hunting. It is considered equal exchange if both parties agreed on the same terms and it benefits both of them.
Then
, when the exchange system become more complex and the item
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a tremendous degree,
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society thought there has to be some kind of intricate and detailed scheme to support
this
,
thus
money
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from that.
Civilization changes
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centuries, which affected how
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wealth
.
Life
needs developing not only for primer, secondary and tertiary segments but
also
quarterly and so on which need
money
to
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it. Even if some segments are not important for
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to live their
life
,
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by generating ideas of contentment and
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to pursue it, even though it is actually a
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kind of happiness. The public begin to see
wealth
as an important aspect of
life
,
although
this
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supported by the world's government and
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bank, revolving everything around
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, and take a
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benefits from the common mass. From my experience, whenever I had a list of goods I want to buy to achieve my well-being, my list would never be emptied even if I had already
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it all. Because, when I already buying things from the list, I would always add new things, and I would never feel satisfied and always tried into buying more even if I do not have much cash
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begin with.
To summarize,
wealth
is important in
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because it can buy contentment these days. But, it is recommended to not
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so much
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cash because everything
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moderation and we could
also
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in many other ways.