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Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative? Why?

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In 21century,
robots
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 have significantly become popular. They are now being used for different purposes at home as well as at
work
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. Do you think
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 is a positive or negative development? And why? They use several aims in
robots
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 in the home in order to have more free time. Fully humanoid
robots
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 are very few
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 more and more
people
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 use
robots
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 on unsafe occasions
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 as in many mines of the world
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 kind of technology can be used
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 of individuals.
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 to
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robots
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 can handle the majority of challenging tasks more easily and efficiently rather than humans since they
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 get tired and
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 be late for their
work
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. To be sure,
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this
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 is positive, it has a lot of disadvantages for
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 of ,all if
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work
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 in any kind of office the majority of
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their job
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 that when a robot will face several kinds of unexpected
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, they
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 solve the problem as the
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. In
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 analysis despite the fact that
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 have become popular technology and have beneficial
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aspect
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 for
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however
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most
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robots
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individuals
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