Today, more and more people use robots to do asks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development.

At the present time, An increasing number of
robots
using by humans in order to do errands both at home and at
work
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robots
is a negative development. There is no doubt that utilizing
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machines to accomplish our
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can be negative for our country and society. For one, most
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people
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robots
to do their
tasks
even
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small
tasks
like doing homework or housework
instead
of doing
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or
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.
As a result
, they are changing and being
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couch a potato people because of lacking
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body activities. If humans use
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robots
to do their
work
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people’s working skills may reduce as a consequence of
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not
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tasks
at
work
and at home.
On the other hand
, to be sure that increasing
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of machines may be worthwhile for industry, factories, and even business offices.
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most factories and industries
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robots
to accomplish
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and they are saving double or even
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times rather than humans.
For example
, the famous billionaire Bill Gates
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robot machines for important
tasks
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business office because
this
process of
robots
increases
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strangest
strongest
strength
of
work
and can save too much time. But,
although
this
kind of advantages of using
robots
, it is not much helpful. To conclude, despite the fact that using
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robots
have some positive side, it not only
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impact
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mankind’s health
,
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but it
also
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effect
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society.
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