A magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influences you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about, explain how this book influenced you, say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

Dear Sir or Madam, I hope

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finds you well . I am writing

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letter with regard to your request to provide a contribution to an article called " the

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that influenced me most " . I am

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of the regular readers of your magazine and I am really thankful for your useful content . I would like to tell you about

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book

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I have read .The

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"Becoming" and is an autobiography

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which was written by Michele Obama . while I was reading the

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it influenced me most with parts of her life before she married Obama and her life in the white house because I had heard about her as a

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lady of the United States of America in the media a lot . Her life was full of change , and challenge and as a woman who has had a lot of common dreams with her , I was really motivated . I want to mention

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part of

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when she accepted to work in a company which was her dream

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day and bought her own car by herself. Honestly , in

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part I imagined myself and I got inspired to follow my dream.

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I think

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book

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may be useful and encouragement for other women who like to make their dreams come true , women who are independent and want to achieve success through their efforts. Faithfully, Neda

Nedjoo

Dec 6, 2022

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