You use the local swimming pool often, and during one of your visits, you have encountered a problem. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter describe what the problem was tell what the swimming pool staff have done about it suggest your own solution to the problem.

Dear Sir, On my
last
visit to your Country Club, I noticed the moss gathered at the bottom of the swimming pool, which turned the colour of the
water
to an unpleasant shade. Upon making my queries to the staff, I discovered that the
water
sitting in the pool was
last
replaced over 2 weeks ago.
This
caused an unbearable smell in the entire vicinity and created an extremely unpleasant atmosphere. Upon asking the staff about the whole 'refilling' situation, I was informed that the pool only gets its
water
from the local
water
tower, which has been shut down due to some mantainence reasons. It
also
bears mentioning that the staff was very polite and kind to my questions, especially the front-desk officer was very empathetic to my concerns and tried his best to answer my queries. I suggest that a facility of your stature should have a backup for the
water
supply at the very least.
Furthermore
, strict checks and scheduled inspections must be conducted to ensure a clean and enjoyable environment at all times. Yours faithfully, Fahad
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