Some people say it is more important to plant tree in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,

peoples

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are thinking it is right

which

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to

planting

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trees

in

the

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open spaces but we must build many

houses

for people's

necessity

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.

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essay will explain in

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detail

ditail

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the reasons as well as steps to mitigate

this

problem with examples in the subsequent paragraphs. These days,

firstly

humans have

though

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it is good which we plant

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a tree

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tree

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trees

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than

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then

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build more housing because nowadays, our

atmosphera

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atmosphere

is suffer

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is suffered

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from fumes and harmful matters

that is

why humans came to a

decosion

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decision

.

However

,

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the felling

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of

trees

did not stop after people started working together to save the

trees

. For

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first

a big open society in America. As a

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result

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the

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felling of

trees

has decreased. After

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the established

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established

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establishing

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green

area

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areas

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.

Secondly

, our

atmosphric

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atmospheric

degadation

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degradation

can be stopped by reproducing with

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the tree

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tree

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trees

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because our

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atmosphere

atmosphera

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atmosphere

is to suffer

since

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30 years. For

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instance

intance

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, the air was cleaner than now because there were not

to

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many factories and

houses

in

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on

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our land as they are now.

Thus

, we must advance to live a natural life. As a

,

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result human disease and atmospheric degradation will change.

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as the number of people has reached 8 billion

consequantly

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consequently

we need

houses

.

Also

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our needs will

also

increase

for

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example:clothes,

foods

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food

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,equipment and

other

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others

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to deliver and

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produce

produse

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produce

these

to

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the population, we need to use a

foctory

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factory

and some machinery.

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if we can use

everythings

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everything

correctly we will achieve success. To sum up,

although

some favour building new

houses

in open spaces to supply new homes, I agree with the

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view

veiw

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view

of planting greenery in those areas.

That is

because I believe that the local's health level is far more important than creating short term poorly planned solutions.