Task 1 There are four main stages in the production of plastic paper clips from this small factory.
The diagram illustrates the procedure used to make plastic paper. Overall, there are four main stages, beginning with putting materials into various moulds and ending with packing and dispatch.
Furthermore
, two of them include quality control before the products are sent to the customers, while the other two involve actual
manufacturing process.
The Correct article usage
the actual
first
stage in the process is that molten plastics are poured into three moulds with different colors
depending on the needs. After Change the spelling
colours
that
the machine will check Add a comma
,that
the
quality of strength of them. Once the clips are not satisfied by it, they will be rejected, whereas the satisfactory ones will be sorted by hand into two groups, namely mixed colours and single colours. Change the word
their
Following
step is that they are checked in order to make sure Change the article
The following
the
qualities of them are Change the word
their
consistence
. Correct your spelling
consistency
Finally
, the final products are packed and dispatched to the markets.Submitted by tracy19978688 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
