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Some people think multiple choice tests are better than tests which require you to write an essay. Other people think that tests which require you to write an essay are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Some
people
 think that
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multiple choice
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tests
 are better than
tests
 that require you to write an
essay
. Either way, both
test
 styles are a huge benefit to different
people
. Choice
tests
 are designed for students to catch a break from all the writing.
This
 is a huge benefit for
people
 whose writing skills are poor so they can study for the
test
 and all they need to do is to choose an answer.
On the other
hand
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 there are
people
 who don'
t
 listen in class and don'
t
 prepare for the
test
. Given a
test
 where students have multiple answers to choose from
,
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 if they are lucky they will choose the right one. On the
second hand
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tests
 that require writing essays have their one
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.
For
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 you can'
t
 get out of studying because if you don'
t
 prepare for the
test
 you will fail. It is
also
a
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good practice for
people
 whose writing skills are not that great. In my
opinion
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 I prefer
tests
 with multiple choices. These
tests
 are a good way to get your grades up and
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they
 much easier than
tests
 that require
essay
 writing but I have no problems with
essay
 writing
tests
 because if you don'
t
 succeed while writing an
essay
 you will see your mistakes and it will make you work more to fill in your gap's. Overall both
test
 variations are good and useful in
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 one way and will make good improvements
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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