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overpopultarion in many major uraban cities is a serios problem. What are the causes of it? How can this problem be solved?

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The migration from villages to
city
areas
 have been significantly increased over a decade.
This
 trend causes severe issues in urban
areas
.
Overpopulation
 is one of the biggest
obstacle
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 to urbanization. I will discuss the reasons for
overpopulation
 and provide solutions in the essay.
Overpopulation
 causes several problems in urban
areas
.
To begin
 with, unemployment is one of the major issues because of an increased number of
people
 in
city
areas
. There are a limited number of jobs available in the market and
people
 who have completed higher education could get those placements.
Secondly
, the
government
 is constantly working on infrastructural facilities
such
 as roads, houses, schools and hospitals to fulfil the requirements of citizens which leads to deforestation.
Furthermore
, traffic is another issue caused by
overpopulation
.
This
 leads to traffic problems in the
city
areas
 and reduces the quality of
air
. There are
people
 who believe that by taking conscious decisions we can reduce the severity of problems caused by
overpopulation
.
Firstly
,
Government
 should announce the jobs for the unemployment force in the public sector, which would help
people
 to earn money and
thus
 the crime rate in the
city
 area will be decreased. As construction is an ongoing process in urban
areas
, Governments and
people
 should come together and plant more trees and save the environment for a better and a healthy future.
Lastly
, the
government
 should emphasise using public transport for good
air
 quality.
For example
, Delhi is the capital of India and the
city
 has the worst
air
 quality, to control
the
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air
 pollution
Government
 has decided to use vehicles on
an
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alternate days for the local residents. Overall, I believe that, with equal efforts from the
government
 and individuals, we can overcome the problem of
overpopulation
.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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