A friend of yours is thinking of going to a camping holiday for the first time this summer. She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter -explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday -describe some possible disadvantages -say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer.

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Dear Sara, How are you doing? I hope my letter finds you and your family in the best of health. The other day you were asking for my advice about going on a camping holiday in the California GreenFarms forest. I would definitely recommend you that place. You will be amazed to see the safety and comfort that the management of

this

area provides.

However

, there is a possibility that you may encounter some issues.

Such

as, they do not have unlimited clean water for drinking or cleaning, so you might have to pay extra for having continuous access to water.

In addition

, they do not provide separate vehicle parking for the visitors,

therefore

, you have to take a stroll for about 250 meters to the camping site from the allocated parking area which is near the highway. My sons and I have been planning for a very long to go somewhere to escape from our tough schedule but got no luck. I was thinking if you could consider taking me with you. I had a very tough work routine for the

last

2 months, so I want to take a break and enjoy myself a little bit. I am eagerly waiting for your reply. Yours sincerely, Leo

Submitted by anniezafar3 on Wed Dec 07 2022

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