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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Why?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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