Some people think that the government should increase tax on unhealthy food to encourage people to start eating healthily. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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people
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say
that Change the verb form
says
government
should Use synonyms
rise
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raise
tax
on fast Use synonyms
food
with Use synonyms
reason
that Add an article
the reason
a reason
people
should start Use synonyms
eat
healthy Change the form of the verb
eating
food
. In my opinion, Use synonyms
government
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do not should
increase taxes, because I think that unhealthy Remove the verb
should not
food
must not have big value. I will give two arguments Use synonyms
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on
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in
this
essay.
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apply
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people
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the people
meaning
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the meaning
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the word
food
", Use synonyms
is
to Correct pronoun usage
which is
having
dinner or something else faster and only Wrong verb form
have
this
type of Linking Words
food
can help with it. Use synonyms
Government
should not think about Use synonyms
this
problem and must Linking Words
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increase
increse
taxes Correct your spelling
increase
for
other unhealthy things, like Change preposition
on
sigarrets
or Correct your spelling
garrets
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alcohols
alhocols
, which are unhealthier than unhealthy Correct your spelling
alcohol
food
. Use synonyms
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also
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tax
rate for Correct article usage
the tax
siggarets
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singlets
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which
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a
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apply
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first
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place Correct your spelling
first
between
all Change preposition
among
of
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apply
countries
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the countries
lowest
number of smokers.
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the lowest
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, unhealthy Linking Words
food
is very delicious and when Use synonyms
people
eat Use synonyms
this
kind of Linking Words
food
, they have endorphins in their Use synonyms
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stimuli
stimulus
stimul
system, which is Correct your spelling
stimulant
also
good for them to not take Linking Words
a
depression. Most Remove the article
apply
of
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apply
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people
go to meetings in restaurants, but only Add an article
the people
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of them Linking Words
goes
to rich restaurants because not all of them can pay for it and they go to fast Correct subject-verb agreement
go
food
restaurants. For, example if the Use synonyms
government
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tax
, Fix the agreement mistake
taxes
a lots
of Correct the article-noun agreement
a lot
lots
people
cannot have Use synonyms
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endorphins
endorphine
and cannot Correct your spelling
endorphins
with
friends in places that they want to be.
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be with
government
rises Use synonyms
Use synonyms
tax
Fix the agreement mistake
taxes
for
unhealthy Change preposition
on
food
, it gives to Use synonyms
people
only bad feelings. It is because of Use synonyms
increasing
not Correct article usage
the increasing
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a such
the such
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things
of
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be take
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be taken
people
what they actually want.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite