you recently recieved a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job.you think he /she get a job.

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Dear Rasika, how are you? I hope you are been well. I received your letter yesterday and
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understood you are struggling between higher education and doing work. If I were you I would do an activity. If you go to school you have to study for another two years continuously.
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according to the present situation of the
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you would not enjoy school. According to the financial situation of your ,home I think it's a bit difficult for your parents to bare that. Even you will not take
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leisure time to do a part-time job. So If you do a job you can earn a good amount of money monthly. I think
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you can take care of your parents too and
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It will help to release your stress about family problems. I suggest selecting a job relevant to the marketing field or finding a vacancy in the production sector. According to your appearance and ability to talk to ,people the marketing field will be better. You will show your talents very fast and will be able to promote very quickly. So think about that twice. be happy and enjoy. I hope we can meet
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week on Prabath's birthday.
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will talk more.Take care. best regard
Indunil
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • Firsthand
  • Practical skills
  • Theoretical focus
  • Financial independence
  • Career advancement
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  • Part-time studies
  • Online courses
  • Financial stability
  • Career goals
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