Your neighbour keeps his animal in his garden and they create problem for you.you have problem with animal.write a letter to your neighbour.describe the problem.suggest the solution.ehat action willyou take if its unsolved.

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Dear Mr

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Connor

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letter, to let you know about the problems created by your dog whom you keep in your background.

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animal is unfortunately not trained,

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makes it try to attack me every morning when I try to go to work.

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, the noises are becoming insupportable

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at night. I suggest you

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keep it inside your house, the thing that could make it feel more secure which will reduce definitely the noise. Another point is that you need to see a dog trainer who could give you some advice about how to take care of

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an animal. I want you to know that I am

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an animal lover, but I am afraid that if the problem will not solve, I will call an animal association for reporting. I am waiting for your reaction. With all my respect. Your neighbour Mary

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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7 paragraphs

152 words

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