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In the past when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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Each year, tremendous international
students
 depart from their motherland, flying abroad for academic learning. Many of them are admitted
by
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 prestigious universities. Internationalized
education
 has been an unstoppable growing trend, while it comes with
both
 boons and banes. The merits are obvious. Top universities slip their gate to worldwide applicants, handing them a key
for
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 the
most rare
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 and valuable
education
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 resource.
Both
 the intakes and taker tap into the mutual selection process, as it facilitates the applicants to pursue their academic dreams in the most knowledgeable schools or assists in building a formidable alumni network
via
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 including
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talented personnel globally.
Besides
, learning in a foreign country provides
students
a
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multiple cultural
exposure
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, reinforcing their capabilities of communication and collaboration in diverse cultures or situations, which benefits them in career development as it is crucial for graduates to survive in a diversified working environment. There are,
however
, some disadvantages. The primary one is that international
students
 shrink the limited positions for domestic
students
. Parents, especially those from states
of
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 superior
education
 presence, complain about the occupied portfolio
international
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students
. Local applicants face increasingly fierce competition for admission
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 to reduced headcounts.
Also
, the tuition fee for overseas
students
 is distortedly higher than
domestic
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students
, which
impose
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financial
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 burden
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students
 from impoverished families. Many authorities have realized it, and they offer a wide range of
scholarship
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 for the eligible. In general,
both
 institutions and
students
 benefit from international learning
programme
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.
Although
 it intensifies the competition in university admission, it can be well addressed through a reasonable allocation of intake scheme. Educational internationalization offers institutions and
students
 to select the right fit for
them
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 world widely, mobilizing the best of
education
resource
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 and human potential.
Though
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 the learning
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programme
progremme
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programme
,
both
 universities and
students
 construct a distinguished people network, which is in
favor
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 of their long-term development.
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