Your child is going away on a school trip for three days to another country. The head teacher wants some parents to join the trip and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: Say why you would like to go Suggest what you could do to help during the trip Ask some more questions about the trip
Dear Mrs./Mr.,
I am writing
this
letter to express my interest in accompanying my son on the school trip to USA
. We were already pondering about a trip to Correct article usage
the USA
USA
, but due to my busy schedule, we could not make it. Correct article usage
the USA
However
, I will be free next
month, so it will be a great Correct your spelling
opportunity
oppertunity
for me to join my son on the excursion to Correct your spelling
opportunity
U.S.A
.
I have visited Correct article usage
the U.S.A
U.S.A
multiple times, in connection with my business deals, and I am very Correct article usage
the U.S.A
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familiar
familier
with the city you are Correct your spelling
familiar
Correct your spelling
planning
planinng
to visit; Correct your spelling
planning
therefore
, I think I will be able to share a lot of useful information with the Correct your spelling
students
stundents
. Correct your spelling
students
However
, I need some clarification regarding the travel itinerary. Firstly
, what will be the mode of transportation between the cities in U.S.A.
? Correct article usage
the U.S.A.
Secondly
, are we supposed to book the hotels ourselves or it will be done by the School administration.
I really hope you will allow me to join my son on the school trip.
Thank you for your consideration
Yours faithfully
Tony M NidhiryChange the punctuation
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite