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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future devlopment of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future devlopment of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps below illustrate an industrial
area
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 in Norbiton and what it will look like in the future after it is redeveloped. From both maps, we can see that the industrial
area
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 is going to be converted
to
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 a residential
area
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. The central roundabout to the south of the river has factories lying to the east, and west. These factories are to be replaced with residential houses. A school is to be situated on the far east of the roundabout and a
play ground
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playground
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 to the
north-east
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northeast
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area
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 of the roundabout.
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, a medical centre will be built
on
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in
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 the
south-west
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southwest
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area
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 of the roundabout and shops will occupy the
south west
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southwest
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area
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 of the
round about
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roundabout
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. There will be
construction
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the construction
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 of roads as well, a smaller roundabout is to be built to the south of the present one, and to the
north
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,north
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 another
road
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 is to be constructed from the roundabout and beyond the river where another residential building is to be built in the former farmland
area
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. From the
north-west
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northwest
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area
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 of the central
round about
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roundabout
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, a new
road
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 is to be constructed which leads to three more residential buildings, one to the far end of the new
road
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 and two to the right of the
road
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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