The number of British visitors to the US and American visitors and spent

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bar graph shows the number of
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tourists
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to the US and the opposite from 2011 to 2015 and the
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one is the amount spent by those visitors in that period. According to the
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graph, it is clear that British travel to the US is bigger than American visits to the
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. Digits of
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from the
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to the US fell slightly in the early three years,
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increased gradually in 2014 and 2015. But the quantity of US tourism to the
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remained in 2011 and 2012 but declined in 2013.
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, that peaked at 35000 thousand people in 2015. T In the
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graph, it is apparent that the amount of expenditure by
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tourists
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in the US is still more than the number of US
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to the
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. For the expense by
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tourists
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, growth is slow from $3.8 to $4.1 billion for three years
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surged quickly to 2015 with about $6 billion. With the US traveller from 2011 to 2013, the outlay is almost stable. By contract
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three years later,
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grew steadily to nearly $1 billion each year.

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